Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 leading on from this thread Barneybrendan and i have started a new business, At the moment there is a simple site but it will be build on as we go along, Barney has all the knowhow but between us we can cover the whole of the southwest and cornwall.Wish us luck http://www.fibresealsouthwest.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Looks good. Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 Looks good. Good luck! cheers mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPRALOOPY Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Change the where we are page soon!! Good luck mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedM Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Way too many apostrophes there boy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 cheers mate I though you said you had no skills. Or are you leaning on the job? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 Change the where we are page soon!! Good luck mate. Sorted till we work out what to put in it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 Way too many apostrophes there boy. I think i was over compensating Kingdong I though you said you had no skills. Or are you leaning on the job? I know more than i thought Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 So have you actually given up your job? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Way too many apostrophes there boy.You beat me to it. Blackie, Plurals shouldn't have apostrophes. Words on you page like: fitting's check's roof's extension's Pond's and feature's should not have an apostrophe. Also, What is GPR? The above is meant to help not criticise. Apart from the above it looks quite professional to me. Best of luck with your new venture, guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 So have you actually given up your job? not yet, will wait for it to pick up with the roofing first Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 Also, What is GPR? The above is meant to help not criticise. Apart from the above it looks quite professional to me. Best of luck with your new venture, guys. GPR is me trying to do it all too quick, I have changed it to GRP, Glass re enforced plastic, cheers Jake, will change it now EDIT: all of the above changed, Cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 How much per square meter? and how far will you travel? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 What's this bit about? ... Fibreglass roofing has a much longer lifespan than traditional felt roofing, so much so that we offer a LIFETIME GUARANTEE on all our fittings and our very own extended warranty with yearly checks. The customer can buy an extended warranty beyond the lifetime guarantee? Maybe this could be clearer. Might it look look a bit fishy otherwise? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Well done. couple of things:- Emergency call out - the emergency bit is spelt wrong. The 'fast and friendly' bit at the top has a capital F for friendly, doesn't really fit in. Maybe expand on why your product is stronger etc like you say. Good luck with it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 .... Also, isn't it fibreglass so shouldn't it be fibresealsouthwest.co.uk ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 How much per square meter? and how far will you travel? As far as you mate, Will give you a price tomorrow Well done. couple of things:- Emergency call out - the emergency bit is spelt wrong. The 'fast and friendly' bit at the top has a capital F for friendly, doesn't really fit in. Maybe expand on why your product is stronger etc like you say. Good luck with it! Cheers ears .... Also, isn't it fibreglass so shouldn't it be fibresealsouthwest.co.uk ? Its ether or mate http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fiber Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barneybrendan Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 the site is still being built so please be patient as we build it up.more details on the services will be added once i forward them to mr blackie.including details of the grp roofing process with diagrams ect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Its ether or mate http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fiber Looks a bit American if you ask me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barneybrendan Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 Looks a bit American if you ask me. its getting changed back to the original name fibreseal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abz Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Good luck guys! Some good advice on here. Think I'll be getting you guys to proof read a new business site if I do one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiten55 Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Good luck with the business guys i'd give you a job, if i didnt live on the 2nd floor of a 3 storey building Also, you may wanna change "Insert special offer here. Change this text and logo on the 'page master'" before someone comes along with a b.o.g.o.f Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ellis Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Way to go mate - not looked at the site yet - hope it's a great success mate! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackie Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 Cheers chaps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lbm Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Well done Al and Barney. I look forward to browsing your site, but first I need lunch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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